Category: Writers Block
Whats the point of it all? What makes it all worthwhile? I've lost it all to this. My life my home even my art.I have nothing left to give my love. Because while you comfort, you also abandon,while you create you also destroy. I never wanted this stradding the white line, between love and hate. I need your smile and your comforting hand I need your love and you beside me at night. But I need myself more, I need to be myself because without that, I am no one. And you have given me more than I can afford I can't ever count the smiles or the pain you have brought me. But there is one the ache deep within when you took my soul, you share in this package deal my love, but I can't afford to now, the price is just too high. Even a lifetime of happiness isn't worth this, losing and forgetting how I am. Even though I'd never be alone, you'd be sleeping with a corpse.
wow...i like the ending...i really! really! like the ending...oh, i like the rest of it too, but ...wow.
I have nothing to say, except that I agree with Galileo. Goblin, that poem is a real thought provoker, and the last line says it all. I think it can only be understood by someone if they have been in a deep distructive relationship.
Just my thoughts.
Bob
Thank you profusely I just wrote it after I had watched a programme about escaping and doing what you really want to do.listening to the guys saying no matter what just do it hit me hard.In my case tearing off into the distance on a 895cc Triumph bike,is impossible.So I felt resentful and the relationship theme is a metaphor for feeling trapped by circumstance.